Thursday, December 3, 2015
Thesis- Taliban
The Taliban, which can be defined in many manners including an extreme terrorist group to a direct descendant of a "political" system, have done many questionable and often horrible acts within its lifespan as a recognized organization beginning on one end of the spectrum with terrorist attacks to the other side with peace negotiations with the Afghan president, while this all leads back to the groups early stages of development, starting as a sphere of influence in Afghanistan to becoming what it is known for today, terrorism and causing massive trouble to the international community.
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This gets the idea across and is good, but you may want to make it more concise, as it is fairly long for one sentence.
ReplyDeleteOverall, I feel that it is nicely done. It provides a good overview of the general background; however, it is quite long and might sound a little 'forced' together. I think that there might be one or two points that you could either cut or condense to make it sound a little more to the point and easier to follow. Otherwise, I think that the information included is great.
ReplyDeleteYou are trying to fit too much into your thesis - it reads more like an introduction paragraph. What is your argument? The answer to this question is your thesis statement.
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