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Thursday, December 3, 2015
Thesis - Syrian Refugee Crisis
Although the European Union accepts the entrance of Syrian refugees, some states within the European Union such as France and the UK have limited their commitments in taking Syrian refugees in a wise manner.
Very controversial take on the refugee crisis! It will be interesting to see how you level your argument to be both precise and informative. Perhaps, reword part of your thesis. Maybe, start off by simply stating the "wise manner" of the certain EU states who wish to limit their commitment, and then give some insight as to how, to effectively lead into the rest of your paper. Though, well done on providing a bit of background as well as highlighting the players involved in the Crisis.
Very concise and to the point, which is good as your thesis is easy to understand. I liked how you added the countries that are involved and gave some background information. I think your argument will be very interesting and cannot wait to see how your paper plays out.
Very controversial take on the refugee crisis! It will be interesting to see how you level your argument to be both precise and informative. Perhaps, reword part of your thesis. Maybe, start off by simply stating the "wise manner" of the certain EU states who wish to limit their commitment, and then give some insight as to how, to effectively lead into the rest of your paper. Though, well done on providing a bit of background as well as highlighting the players involved in the Crisis.
ReplyDeleteVery concise and to the point, which is good as your thesis is easy to understand. I liked how you added the countries that are involved and gave some background information. I think your argument will be very interesting and cannot wait to see how your paper plays out.
ReplyDelete"Wise" is a rather vague word - it will be useful to focus your arguments with a more focused term.
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