Thursday, December 3, 2015
Thesis - China in the South China Sea
The ascent of China and it's subsequent challenge to the U.S. as the de facto power in the Pacific is fueled in part due to it's historical dominance and national identity in the region, further justifying it's controversial claiming of land and island reclamation in the South China Sea.
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Very good thesis statement. You did a good job of posing your thesis as an argument rather than simply stating facts. The only criticism I have is that the wording is a little difficult to decipher.
ReplyDeleteVery well written thesis statement. You clearly focused on one main point and your sentence was very complex. It seemed like you spent a lot of time conducting research because your thesis statement showed your understanding of your topic.
ReplyDeleteNot sure if you need "further" in your thesis. Just need some slight grammatical fixes...
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