Thursday, December 3, 2015
Thesis- Greece's Financial Stability
Greece is sticking to their Financial plan which is helping to keep stability from an international standpoint, it is also starting to bring stability to Greece; at this point in time all other European countries are financially stable and as long as Greece continues to stick to the plan that the Eurozone developed Stability will continue to come to Greece, Europe, and the rest of the world.
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I would shorten in it bit, so it becomes more concise, but besides that it is a very strong argument and should be an interesting topic to support.
ReplyDeleteOverall, I feel that the content in your thesis is good. However, it was a little hard to follow. I think that it is a run-on sentence at the point of the first comma. It was a little choppy because of this. Also, add a comma between "developed stability" in the last line. All in all, I think that with just a little editing to help the flow, your thesis could be really great.
ReplyDeleteThis borders on a statement of fact rather than a thesis statement. You need to more clearly identify the aspects of the financial plan that you will address and then indicate your prediction on the impact of these policies.
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