Wednesday, December 2, 2015
Thesis - Boko Haram
Boko Haram poses a socio-political threat to localities in Nigeria and Cameroon and global communities because of their intent to create a purist Islamic state, their increasingly widespread violence, and the corruption of minds around the world with Islamic fundamentalist ideals.
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Strong thesis statement that provides multiple points of discussion. Rather than stating facts, you made the thesis argumentative, which I found to be very good. Although this is meant to be a complex sentence, I found the structure to be slightly awkward, but other than that, the thesis statement was well worded.
ReplyDeleteGood thesis! I feel that you addressed your argument well but as suppose to saying "localities in Nigeria and Cameroon and global communities..." I would recommend saying "localities in Nigeria, Cameroon, and global communities..."
ReplyDeleteExcellent!
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