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Sunday, December 6, 2015
Thesis- Military Drones
America's recent use of military drones as weapons of attack and surveillance in Pakistan, Yemen, and Somalia negatively affects these countries, especially in regards to these countries' population loss, acrimony towards America, and social status.
Your argument is very strong. The thesis statement provides a broad overview of your topic. Overall, I can't find anything wrong with your thesis statement.
What do you mean by population loss? Is this referring to the deaths of militants and civilians? Also, what do you mean by social status? This usually refers to domestic and/or day-to-day. Do you mean international prestige, power, or diplomacy?
Your argument is very strong. The thesis statement provides a broad overview of your topic. Overall, I can't find anything wrong with your thesis statement.
ReplyDeleteWhat do you mean by population loss? Is this referring to the deaths of militants and civilians? Also, what do you mean by social status? This usually refers to domestic and/or day-to-day. Do you mean international prestige, power, or diplomacy?
ReplyDeleteStrong argument, however I would like Mrs. Friday said elaborate on population loss as well as social status.
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