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Monday, December 7, 2015
Thesis- Cuba
The communist dictatorship of Cuba has lead to poor diplomatic relations and tension with the rest of the world, and ultimately has lead to conflict between governments with different philosophies and ideals.
You are on the right track but you're going to need to focus a bit more. For example, specify which countries/parts of the world you will address in your essay. Also, indicate whether you're focusing on physical or ideological conflicts.
Your thesis statement provides a broad overview of your topic, while providing adequate information. I can't find anything wrong with it.
ReplyDeleteYou are on the right track but you're going to need to focus a bit more. For example, specify which countries/parts of the world you will address in your essay. Also, indicate whether you're focusing on physical or ideological conflicts.
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