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Wednesday, December 2, 2015
Thesis- Civil War in Yemen
The current civil war in Yemen, caused by internal tensions, is negatively escalating the tensions in the surrounding nations.
Very concise. Excellent clearly stated, yet blunt, argumentative point. Perhaps, provide further detail and more complexity that would give the reader some more insight into the "internal tensions."
I agree with John, your thesis is very brief, but does provide a clear argument for the effects of the Yemeni civil war. The only criticisms that I have are that there is a large room for added detail, and the inclusion of the word "tensions" twice makes the statement a bit awkward to read.
Very concise. Excellent clearly stated, yet blunt, argumentative point. Perhaps, provide further detail and more complexity that would give the reader some more insight into the "internal tensions."
ReplyDeleteI agree with John, your thesis is very brief, but does provide a clear argument for the effects of the Yemeni civil war. The only criticisms that I have are that there is a large room for added detail, and the inclusion of the word "tensions" twice makes the statement a bit awkward to read.
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