Date/Context: During the late 1950's leading into the early 1960's, a group of African political leaders along with independence movement delegates formed the African People's Conference in an attempt to overcome the European forces of imperialism and colonialism that were ruining the lives of many Africans in several countries. This will to fight for dominance over their own continent shown by Africans was significant because in a way, it displayed the cruelty of Western powers and their strong desire for wealth and power. The document created by this group of Africans is essentially a list of common goals and guidelines for the group detailing what they wish to accomplish. The context of this article is very important because it puts our lives in perspective. I would never have though that a mere 65 years ago, many African countries were fighting for independence and freedom, while there are many Westerners that take their belongings and position for granted.
Summary: This document lists the desires and goals of the African People's Conference, including their thoughts about imperialism and colonialism. It is clear to identify the common goal of abolishing imperialism and colonialism due to the position many African countries have been placed in under European rule. The document also outlines ten rules that would soon be a reality for Africans after they gained their independence. These include that African military powers should not be abused or used for wrong-doing, but to stand for what is right and rid the continent of Western imperialism. Another key point is that the People's Conference wishes to preserve the rights of all Africans regardless of sex or origin, which was soon put into action once the countries gained independence.
Key Quotation:
"That the All-African People's Conference in Accra declares its full support to all fighters for freedom in Africa, to all those who resort to peaceful means of non-violence and civil disobedience, as well as to all those who are compelled to retaliate against violence to attain national independence and freedom for the people. Where such retaliation becomes necessary, the Conference condemns all legislations which consider those who fight for their independence and freedom as ordinary criminals."
I believe that this overall was a very well written PDP. It defined the meaning and the results of the "All African People's Conference." There were only a few things I would have added. One of them being that in the author bio, you wrote that "European powers were not only unlawful, but inhumane," I think the PDP would have benefited well if you gave an example of some of these inhumane actions. This same idea of using examples to back up your statements could be found throughout the Date and Context section. On the other hand there were many things that you did well on. One of them being that you mentioned in the Date and Context section your opinion of what you believed was an astonishing, yet horrifying reality. I am referring to when you said you could not believe this had all occurred only 65 years ago. Another valid and well-noted point you had made came up in the summary section when you clearly stated the goal of this conference being the end of imperialism and colonialism in Africa. Finally, this was a strong, and well-thought out PDP.
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